Tinuvielle of Epic Fail (http://www.comicofepicfail.com) is supposed to be in this page somewhere, but I don’t think you can tell. :(
Also, I think this crowd has money at stake, or something. Maybe they’re just depraved.
Dang! You’re playing to a rough crowd! I read the critiques (if that what you call insulting one artwork because it isn’t their style) several pages back and immediately went back to the beginning to see what the were looking at that I missed. Yes, the story is a bit confusing at the beginning up to where those comments were made. But I’m assuming that you will tie these scenes together in the opening chapter, so that they make sense. As far as the art work, i don’t see anything wrong with the anatomy of your characters (I surely didn’t see any mouths falling off of any faces ;)) . I’ll hang around and see how this all falls into place. Whatever you do, DON’T GIVE UP or get depressed by those comments! Strive for improvement and carry on.
Aw, thanks. Those comments were still eye-opening in ways, useless as they appear. In truth the bulk of the actual story in the prologue won’t come up again (probably… actually, I could find a direct way to make it make sense XD ooo ideas, my script is constantly evolving), but yes, things will make more sense, and they will pretty soon.
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Tinuvielle of Epic Fail (http://www.comicofepicfail.com) is supposed to be in this page somewhere, but I don’t think you can tell. :(
Also, I think this crowd has money at stake, or something. Maybe they’re just depraved.
Dang! You’re playing to a rough crowd! I read the critiques (if that what you call insulting one artwork because it isn’t their style) several pages back and immediately went back to the beginning to see what the were looking at that I missed. Yes, the story is a bit confusing at the beginning up to where those comments were made. But I’m assuming that you will tie these scenes together in the opening chapter, so that they make sense. As far as the art work, i don’t see anything wrong with the anatomy of your characters (I surely didn’t see any mouths falling off of any faces ;)) . I’ll hang around and see how this all falls into place. Whatever you do, DON’T GIVE UP or get depressed by those comments! Strive for improvement and carry on.
Artie
Aw, thanks. Those comments were still eye-opening in ways, useless as they appear. In truth the bulk of the actual story in the prologue won’t come up again (probably… actually, I could find a direct way to make it make sense XD ooo ideas, my script is constantly evolving), but yes, things will make more sense, and they will pretty soon.
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lol! “At least try not to mess up my hair…” this is why I LOVE pretty boys! <3